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this song, or poem or something.
Replies: 3Last Post Nov. 23, 2008 8:33pm by VonGuy1
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All your life you knew
Things that were expected of you
Tasks that you were born to complete
And human nature's wants and needs.
But now I see
And now I know
Dall me cynical
I prefer term "insightful"
Because I see
We cant all be
Perfect.
Always did your best at everything that came your way
For "Failure, is not an option" theyd say
You were taught this from such a young age
And never thought to question it.
But now I see
And now I know
Dall me cynical
I prefer term "insightful"
Because I see
We cant all be
Perfect.

Perfect, oh, perfect
We all want to be perfect
But hows it possible for everyone to
Be the best?
Reality, it hurts some times,
But you'll just have to learn to cope with the fact
That your never gonna get what you wanted.
Because perfects, not so perfect
If getting there, hurts this much.

And now I know
Dall me cynical
I prefer term "insightful"
Because I see
We cant all be
Perfect.


8:30 pm on Nov. 23, 2008
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its good points but its not fantastically presented

more of a vent than a poem really

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carracer


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As a poem it lacks pattern and creativity.
In my opinion of course.

Not sure about as a song.
The same rules don't apply as in a poem.

Either way though, I just think its a shallow idea.
It lacks depth and thought.

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VonGuy1

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i like it

it pretty good

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