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Replies: 9 — Last Post Nov. 30, 2008 12:39am by Colleen35
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"This space seems to me to be excellent. More than moments I see represented sensations."

i need someone make that sentence right, because i feel there's something wrong in it, but i can't see what  

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It sounds pretty vague in it's intent. What is the context? What are you trying to get across?

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i dont understand what the second part means.
this space seemed excellent to me
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This space is excellent to me.I see represented sensations more than moments.

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it seems to me that this space is excellent?

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"This space seems excellent to me. There are many moments that I see represented sensations."
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This space seems excellent to me. I see represented sensations than many moments.

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Although both sentences are theoretically correct, you probably want to reword the phrases. The second sentence is way too confusing, and I'm still not sure if I get its intent:

"This space seems excellent to me. I see represented sensations more than (I see) moments."

Post edited at 11:09 am on Nov. 27, 2008 by GeneCosta

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Quote: from victoria6689 at 8:25 am on Nov. 27, 2008
"This space seems to me to be excellent. More than moments I see represented sensations."

i need someone make that sentence right, because i feel there's something wrong in it, but i can't see what

"This space is excellent," "I find this space to be excellent," "This space seems excellent," "More than (just) moments(Comma) I see sensations represented."

I strongly recommend the 'just' in the second sentence, but it isn't absolutely necessary. The comma after 'moments' indicates the proper rhythm which gives that sentence feeling and makes it clear that the sentence is actually correct.

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This space seems to me to be excellent. More than moments, I see represented sensations

It's perfectly fine with the the comma there.  Stamp of approval.

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