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Replies: 19Last Post Aug. 3 2:15pm by pujolsfan
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Kitty Kiska


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Quote: from pujolsfan at 10:25 pm on July 5, 2009

Quote: from Kitty Kiska at 8:22 am on July 4, 2009

You know the point of poems is so that they are meaningful, people here can write poems but not about anything to do with your friendhsip with this girl.

whatever someone here is able to do is going to be a lot better than what i could attempt to do



Well then you could have suggested more things to include...like she likes apples and the colour red and hates dogs, is scared of butterfly's...somehting for the artistic people to work with you know what i mean?

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5:49 am on July 6, 2009 | Joined: Jan. 2008 | Days Active: 444
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Quote: from Kitty Kiska at 7:49 am on July 6, 2009

Quote: from pujolsfan at 10:25 pm on July 5, 2009

Quote: from Kitty Kiska at 8:22 am on July 4, 2009

You know the point of poems is so that they are meaningful, people here can write poems but not about anything to do with your friendhsip with this girl.
 

 whatever someone here is able to do is going to be a lot better than what i could attempt to do



Well then you could have suggested more things to include...like she likes apples and the colour red and hates dogs, is scared of butterfly's...somehting for the artistic people to work with you know what i mean?

yeah, i kinda wanted it to be generic. be artsy with words and not necessarily things about her. the less personal it is the less creepy she will think i am

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5:10 am on July 7, 2009 | Joined: May 2008 | Days Active: 400
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Kitty Kiska


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Quote: from pujolsfan at 1:10 pm on July 7, 2009

Quote: from Kitty Kiska at 7:49 am on July 6, 2009

Quote: from pujolsfan at 10:25 pm on July 5, 2009

Quote: from Kitty Kiska at 8:22 am on July 4, 2009

You know the point of poems is so that they are meaningful, people here can write poems but not about anything to do with your friendhsip with this girl.

  whatever someone here is able to do is going to be a lot better than what i could attempt to do


 
 Well then you could have suggested more things to include...like she likes apples and the colour red and hates dogs, is scared of butterfly's...somehting for the artistic people to work with you know what i mean?

yeah, i kinda wanted it to be generic. be artsy with words and not necessarily things about her. the less personal it is the less creepy she will think i am



Well i guess so.

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OK, here's my alternate version. If you'd like me to mix the two, or change either of them just let me know!  

How exciting can it be
When all can hear, and say and see
That Shay Mecke has turned 18
I think it's one amazing thing

As friend I count you, rain or shine
And more skies you've yet to find
Wherever you can see a path
I'm sure you'll live it with a laugh

I send you health and happiness
And much good luck, and joy no less
When all is said and all is done
Remember all the birthday fun

18 years have led you here
Decades more of life and cheer
Are waiting just around the bend
Congratulations, my good friend!

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Quote: from R Blake at 8:14 am on July 3, 2009

Hi pujolsfan! Cool to hear about your friend's b-day. I wrote this for her, and though it may be on the short side I really hope you like it:

Shay Mecke, 18-to-be
Seven months since New Year's eve
The fireworks are like your life
Spiraling up into flight

They say that youth is tied to fun
Well I say youth is in the sun
As long as birthdays light the sky
You'll have joy in all your life

I've always treasured all my friends
Those whom talk and smiles lend
And you I treasure eighteen times
Today, for with you friendship rhymes

In years to come we'll grow together
Days of fair and cloudy weather
Now let us think of futures bright
And toast your 18 years tonight!



YOU WIN!!!


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