Convince me that there's a way out.
Find me a light - an underground.

When he breaks down my door,
feel the seconds pass.
When denim hits the floor,
and he shatters my glass.
When I'm torn at the seams,
and can't hear anything
but the sound of my screams,
will that make you believe
me?

It's raining out.
The sun can't watch.
I'm passing out.
And then, I'm gone.

I cannot breathe. There's no way out.
Take me, away, to underground.

fuckmylife i failed extra hard

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is that about you loosing your virginity?

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verrryyyy close.
think more violent.
and it isn't about my own personal experience

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I actually like this poem. My only issue is the third stanza's ending. I think it would serve a lot better if you chopped off the me? and just left it as believe? I generally like this. :D

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hey. thanks =)

yeah that's a good suggestion.
i didn't really edit it much cause i just wrote it on the spot but i should really fix that =)

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is it about rape?

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bingo - i had a friend who was just raped,
and killed. =(