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I told her she was beautiful
and when she asked me Why?
I left her in silence
Because the answer was hers to find

She told me I was wrong
Yet all along we were together
I could see it in her eyes:
She had the beauty
Hidden deeply in disguise

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give me a paper & pen
so i can write about my life of sin


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Aw.
That is actually a really cute poem.
I like it. (:

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awhh that sounds sweet :3

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Whether you're drunk or stoned or we're sober and old,
If I'm with you, I'm a happy girl :)

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U just wanna fuck that hot mamma

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*You PMS like a bitch, I would know...*

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Quote: from Agirl18 at 9:56 pm on July 5, 2009

U just wanna fuck that hot mamma
ya trick ya

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give me a paper & pen
so i can write about my life of sin

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Wow, that's a really nice poem. I so wanna read that out loud haha.

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I never thought that I would find my way
Into the light, dreamin to find, who ever you are

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Quote: from HereWeGoAgain at 9:58 pm on July 5, 2009

Wow, that's a really nice poem. I so wanna read that out loud haha.
do it

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give me a paper & pen
so i can write about my life of sin

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I actually really liked that

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They say nothing in life can be completed without passion -
so then show me something or (someone) to be passionate for...

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Quote: from virginia287 at 10:01 pm on July 5, 2009

I actually really liked that
thank you

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give me a paper & pen
so i can write about my life of sin

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