i walk into this house completely empty.

i toss and turn while heartbreak tempts me.

I miss seeing your smiling greet.

i have loved you since we first did meet.

you have been there through all my life.

you didnt leave this world without a fight.

i know more than anything you wanted to stay

but god wanted you , so here im left to pray.

ill miss you so much, god only knows.

and its your wings i think of, everytime it snows.


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What happens when the only person that can make you stop crying
Is the one who made you cry.

It's not bad, but could be better.

Post edited at 6:33 pm on July 5, 2009 by Areola

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She's gone.
She gave me a pen.
I gave her my heart,
she gave me a pen.

i don't mind that it's all one stanza and i like the way you broke it up at good points =)

just.
the rhyming sounded a bit forced at times.

maybe a non-rhyming version?

As well well well said, a non-rhyming version might work nicely as well (Though personally, I've always been a fan of rhymes).