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Areola
Blow Me.
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Do you plan on making writing your career?
If so, DON'T.
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She's gone.
She gave me a pen.
I gave her my heart,
she gave me a pen.
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( belizabeth )
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So what this poem may suck but I have others that are ten times better.
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belizabeth is me.
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jsia
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So show 'em to us.
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Me break the rules? No,i test their elasticity.
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( belizabeth )
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ok....
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belizabeth is me.
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Roger25
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I like it, describes the feeling of love. It is deep and passionate. However it is short which is okay. There are many short poems! Of course it makes sense. The message is quiet clear. A person is waiting for love. Sometimes it is time to move on. Anyways well done. Improve yourself, relax take your time and enjoy your life. =) -Denis R.
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Prankster28
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I like it. 
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