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A poem I worte
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Replies: 6Last Post July 7 10:36am by Here for the lulz
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As life fills my soul,
It's also cold.
As I feel the winds of pain
Pierce into my soul.


As for my lover,
Life is just a cover,
Covering the pain when thy is apart.
For thy wish not to depart.
But we will recover.
You see,
That thy lover,
Holds a key,
The key to what was once pure.
Now he is my cure.
And before you know the meaning of this key,
We shall be rejoicing by the sea.
For love is just a mystery to uncover
But it is also more to discover.


As we weep into the night,
Moaning for watch others sight,
Knowing what we will fight,
We shall what life abroad.
Though we know we shall sod.

But we know the cost,Some may think its not worth the while,
As we walk by and smile,
For we know they are lost,
Lost in the troubles of the world,
That today we solemnly stick a sword through.


But we shall when,
I can smell the victory blowing in the wind.
As if God's mercy is within.
And though may say its worth it in the end
That is not my story to send
Because in this fairy tail,
Our story will never end,
Nor shall the love fail.


So may I say,
A promise that will pay
Even though there isn't enough to say.
I shall love you beyond death do thy part,
For we shall never depart.

I know its cheesy..I wrote it a good while back..just want input


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I'm sorry.

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Its alright, the rhyme and flow seems forced in parts. But its really good none-the-less.

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That's funny, I just googled that and it came up on various sites.

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thanks.its really old..wrote it when i was 11 or 12.just kept it for a while

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Quote: from MystiqueBeauty16 at 10:03 pm on Jan. 16, 2009

Quote: from CarolineLouise at 11:02 pm on Jan. 16, 2009

Quote: from MystiqueBeauty16 at 10:01 pm on Jan. 16, 2009

Quote: from CarolineLouise at 10:59 pm on Jan. 16, 2009

Quote: from MystiqueBeauty16 at 9:58 pm on Jan. 16, 2009

Do we know your selection of movies? No.
   

  I said i have no clue what move to watch    
  so how could i narrow down a selection


  You can't have access to all the movies in the world, I'm pretty sure.


 

 Nope  
 but if i don't have a movie someone suggests, i'll just look at another suggestion


Ah. In that case, Stepbrothers.



Good pick
it's sitting next to me on my window sill

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seems kinda choppy. But I really like the concept

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