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Wrist cutting.
Replies: 31Last Post July 9 2:25pm by blackbandaid
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So this poem is about how stupid I think it is for people to cut themselves. If putting yourself through more pain to avoid another type of pain is all you have left... Talk to someone. Do something.

Your wrists are bleeding
And now you are pleading
Please don't take my life away
You wish you could go back
But now as it turns black
You watch as the colors will fade
From what you do
Because of you
You'll end your life
And ruin theirs too
You've got to stop
While you're still on the top
Before things get carried away
But now you've gone to far
In the back of the black car
Your parents are crying
Your best friend is lying
Says that she had no idea
Your wrists are bleeding
And now you are pleading
Please don't take my life away


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I'd rather spend my time near the birds
Than waste my life wishing I had wings


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DaisyMontana


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You shouldn't write a poem about it

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Dannyjoe1000

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Yeah self harms fuckin awesome

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Go to sleep and close your teary eyes
Never again wake to see the night
Hush little girl don't you dare cry
Sit back and enjoy your final night

Here we are once again
All alone with no friends
They let you bleed and said not a word
Not really knowing how depression hurts

A Cutters' Lullaby

Screaming in your ear
All the things you hate to hear
The names the accusations and suggestions
Suffering from hard learned lessons

Can anybody hear you now?
Your mouth is open, tihnk you are screaming so loud
But a sound doesnt escape your pretty lips
And you just let the knife slip

A Cutters' Lullaby

Can anyone see her here?
Down on her knees and the end so near
Invisible in such a crowded place
Eyes just sliding over her tear streaked place

Under the shadow of the steeple
Passed by the forgiven people
Holding the razor so close, and in her hand her final letter
All these people who never even met her

A Cutters' Lullaby

I sit here with nothing to hold on to
But this blade and you want to take that away too
I am alone and I have nowhere to turn
How many lessons must I be forced to learn?

And in the dead silence on the night
I hear the sounds of my own distant cries
Singing a tune noone else seems to know
And its one I wish I never had to know

A Cutters' Lullaby

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Null, because there is no "you fucking suck dick bitch" option.
I hate shit like this.
It's awful. So much rhyming I could puke.
And don't bash cutters, you don't know their personal problems.

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Quote: from Katx at 1:41 pm on July 9, 2009

Null, because there is no "you fucking suck dick bitch" option.
I hate shit like this.
It's awful. So much rhyming I could puke.
And don't bash cutters, you don't know their personal problems.

I take it you are one??

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Talking does not help everyone


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Quote: from Kaijuu at 1:42 pm on July 9, 2009

Talking does not help everyone

But leaving PERMANENT scars for TEMPORARY problems is stupid IMO.

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I'd rather spend my time near the birds
Than waste my life wishing I had wings

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I think that is what they think 9x outa 10


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Areola


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Quote: from heavyrhythm at 4:42 pm on July 9, 2009

Quote: from Katx at 1:41 pm on July 9, 2009

Null, because there is no "you fucking suck dick bitch" option.  
 I hate shit like this.  
 It's awful. So much rhyming I could puke.  
 And don't bash cutters, you don't know their personal problems.

I take it you are one??

Are "one"? Like it's a group.
Do not talk to me if you are ignorant to the subject you are trying to prove a point on.

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She's gone.
She gave me a pen.
I gave her my heart,
she gave me a pen.


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It was alright... sounded like there was too much forced rhyming (choosing words, just because they rhyme).  I liked the first three lines.

But I also don't agree with your statement to introduce your poem, nor the blame you put on the individual in the poem itself.


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