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Would someone edit my 1 paragraph paper?
Replies: 10Last Post July 14 12:27pm by y4r5xeym5
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Depends on what its on...

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What is it on?

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Quote: from Joep0113 at 12:21 pm on July 14, 2009

Depends on what its on...

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"Hello world. I am attempting to write this paper becuase my teacher, who is admittedly a half-assed teacher, requires all of us to expand our ability to write properly in English. However, since I am lazy or slightly incompetent, I have decided that the first paragraph, the one you are seeing here, shall be written entirely by another person who I have never met. I hope you, the reader, enjoyed it.

Like that?

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Quote: from y4r5xeym5 at 12:23 pm on July 14, 2009

"Hello world. I am attempting to write this paper becuase my teacher, who is admittedly a half-assed teacher, requires all of us to expand our ability to write properly in English. However, since I am lazy or slightly incompetent, I have decided that the first paragraph, the one you are seeing here, shall be written entirely by another person who I have never met. I hope you, the reader, enjoyed it.

Like that?


That's dumb. I said edit. It's always good for someone else to look over your paper.


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Quote: from Wunarmdscissor at 12:24 pm on July 14, 2009

Quote: from y4r5xeym5 at 12:23 pm on July 14, 2009

"Hello world. I am attempting to write this paper becuase my teacher, who is admittedly a half-assed teacher, requires all of us to expand our ability to write properly in English. However, since I am lazy or slightly incompetent, I have decided that the first paragraph, the one you are seeing here, shall be written entirely by another person who I have never met. I hope you, the reader, enjoyed it.  

 Like that?


That's dumb. I said edit. It's always good for someone else to look over your paper.



I can't edit what hasn't been typed silly.

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Quote: from y4r5xeym5 at 12:25 pm on July 14, 2009

Quote: from Wunarmdscissor at 12:24 pm on July 14, 2009

Quote: from y4r5xeym5 at 12:23 pm on July 14, 2009

"Hello world. I am attempting to write this paper becuase my teacher, who is admittedly a half-assed teacher, requires all of us to expand our ability to write properly in English. However, since I am lazy or slightly incompetent, I have decided that the first paragraph, the one you are seeing here, shall be written entirely by another person who I have never met. I hope you, the reader, enjoyed it.

  Like that?


 

 That's dumb. I said edit. It's always good for someone else to look over your paper.



I can't edit what hasn't been typed silly.

I'd send it to you but I don't think you'd take editing seriously.


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Give it to me, and we'll see if it is worth the time and effort :)

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Why bother making a topic about editing your paragraph if you aren't going to take the time to make it available in the topic itself?

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