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Replies: 4Last Post Mar. 2 12:28pm by Sir Tokes Alot
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This is the intro of my essay on Hardcore music.  
It's supposed to be like a story (something we experience while we researched it) in which we give out details and information on the subject.

I'm not into the info sharing part yet, but what do you think?


It's nearly seven o'clock on this cold Friday in February. The fairly large, suburban backyard of 17-year-old [the boy's name here] is buzzing with excitement - the patio next to the garage is packed with dozens of adolescents from fourteen to twenty-four. Cords are being unraveled, tables are set up for selling CD's and hand-designed tee shirts, cigarettes are lit and passed around. It's a relative calm before the storm that's about to strike the make-shift stage.

Post edited at 12:19 pm on Mar. 2, 2009 by TechnoShark

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Damn I need to get some ideas
from you for some of my
essays....
I love it

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It sounds really good.

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This looks like a horror movie waiting to happen.

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Niiiice
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I wanna hear the whole thing when it's done!

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i love that man its trippy haha

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