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The "Solved" Mysteries of Harris Burdick
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I'm so up for this. Done this exercise before for my degree.

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this looks like fun

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I will participate in this.

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Fuck.

I'm down to be a judge.

....I mean, I'm UP to read and discover all of the WONDERFUL creativity/talent the members of LiveWire has to offer

Bring it onnnn!

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Quote: from ToyJetpack at 4:27 pm on Jan. 19, 2010

I'll judge the fuck out of this thing.
You're seriously a judge?

This contest just got even better.

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Quote: from Dear Kat at 10:27 am on Jan. 20, 2010

Quote: from ToyJetpack at 4:27 pm on Jan. 19, 2010

I'll judge the fuck out of this thing.
You're seriously a judge?

This contest just got even better.


Hell yes.

This contest actually sounds interesting.

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i guess your cool copying the post?


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To post or not to post.

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Just watch how quickly the young and naïve become old cynics.


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This is brilliant.

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Quote: from Springs at 7:21 pm on Jan. 19, 2010

I wanna do one :)
I'm excited to read this!

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I can't wait to judge this shit.

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you could die because they could kill you.
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Ah, fuck, I'm posting it.

I did Under the Rug. DUN JUDGE ME.

Readygo:

   There's a girl in the cellar who refuses to die.

   She's been there for a week now. I don't know her name or why it was her that I chose. I've given her nothing since I've locked her in that dank, moldy chamber. Yet, for now, she still breathes.
   She likes to knock. She knocks on the walls, and on the ceiling. I am often greeted by a "rap, tap, tap" while I am trying to drift to sleep in the room overhead. I do not mind. I find it quite soothing.

                                    -----

   There's a girl in the cellar who recently died. I still hear the "rap, tap, tap" late at night while I am trying to fall asleep. She still likes to knock. She's picked up... other habits, as well.
   At first they were small things; a flickering light, or a cool gust of air. She haunted me like a daft child who couldn't distinguish the difference between myself and a schoolyard prankster. It made me laugh. I found it slightly offensive.
   Then one night, I heard her voice, as clear as though she were standing right next to me. It started out as a soft, weeping cry, and I grinned at the familiarity of it. I'd heard this sound before. It had been a wonderful accompaniment to the knocking, whilst she'd still been living in my cellar. But the sound changed. It slowly became a low, mocking, deliberate laugh, then a cackle, then finally a horrible wailing shriek that cut through the soles of my feet and up my spine, relentlessly resonating in my skull.
   It didn't stop until I submerged my head underwater. It didn't stop until I drowned her.

                                        -----

   Two weeks passed and it happened again. That same soft sobbing was back, and I braced myself  for what I knew would follow. But that was only the beginning.
   This time, the sheer intensity of the wailing itself was threatening to split me in two. This time, nothing would stop it. Even after I'd nearly drowned myself, the raucous noise continued without even a hint of ceasing.
   Then other things started happening. The ground beneath me began to shake, as if from an earthquake. Pictures fell from the walls, and plaster from the ceiling. Then, right in front of where I stood, I saw something protrude from beneath the carpet. I tried to stop it. I tried to stop all of it. But the shrieking grew louder, the quaking grew stronger, and the carpet stretched and stretched until it tore open and a slender, decaying hand reached out to touch the tip of my shoe.
   Then, suddenly, everything stopped. Silence took place of the screaming, and the rotting hand withdrew itself. The floor mended behind it, and the shaking calmed. Everything was back in it's proper place. Everything was precisely where it should be, and precisely where it had been before. Everything was in order.
   I was not.

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   There is a girl in the cellar who refuses to die.
   She lives in my floorboards, my walls, in my mind.
   I killed her body, but I couldn't kill her soul,
   And now she won't rest 'til she swallows me whole.

Post edited at 9:09 pm on Jan. 20, 2010 by Tempest

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A quick first entry. KEEP THEM COMING FOLKS.

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If Pokemon were real,
you could die because they could kill you.
(But not really).

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This site has an interesting contest for once?

I can't promise anything amazing but its worth a shot


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Be sure to include the quote above the picture in your short story or it will not be accepted.

Can we split the quote up and place different parts into different areas of the story?


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Quote: from A La Folie at 10:55 pm on Jan. 21, 2010

Be sure to include the quote above the picture in your short story or it will not be accepted.  

Can we split the quote up and place different parts into different areas of the story?


Good question, I'm sorry but I can't allow it because if it were split up, it wouldn't match the picture as well.

I'm sorry.

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