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Replies: 1Last Post Mar. 11 10:40am by wantstofindherprince
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I don't like how these are worded.
~*~Eternity At Last~*~
We're gone from this world
We're in eternity at last
Never to be separated again
The life we could have had
We will have it here instead
I waited forever for this
one single moment with you
to hold you in my arms
and feel your warm embrace
Now I'll never let you go,
never close my eyes again
without you by my side
as our lips brush eachother
I'm reminded of why
I fell in love with you
your touch sends
shivers up my spine
and makes my heart feel light
tears flow down my cheeks
as I look into your eyes
because we'll never part
I see eternity in your eyes

~*~Until It's Gone~*~
You never know what you have until it's gone
you reget things you said and things you did
and regret the things you didn't say or do
because you were too afraid or never thought to
then when they leave you, you cry yourself to sleep
as you stain your pillow you cling to all you had of them
you wish, hope, and pray that this was just a nightmare
but days soon turn into weeks and weeks into years
and you realize this is all to real and it won't change
Could you have changed it? Could you have saved them?
Now you will never know, you will only know what you had


10:35 am on Mar. 11, 2010
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i like the second one the best cuz it is so true...
but i do like the first one its really good

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