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a poem for you
Replies: 1Last Post Nov. 10 3:22pm by eklipse
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everyday i try to convince myself of something different, that i love you, nothing will change and we will always feel the same. tears fall, times pass and i  only have one question....will we ever last? we walk together, holding hands, but i feel a million miles away. can i ever trust you again? i was with someone else, but i will always come back to you. your like a drug and im the addict that cant stay away. you kill me so sweetly that i dont want it to end. i want you to push me away and say you dont love me, but i would let you do anything to me again and again. i will forgive you before you even ask and i love the pain you bring me. you have me on my knees and i want you to love me until the end of time.

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1:32 am on Nov. 10, 2009 | Joined: Nov. 2007 | Days Active: 259
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Usually poems use stanzas.

From this, it just looks like a lot of mushed together, broken sentences.

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