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Which is best?
Replies: 8Last Post Oct. 31 3:37pm by angelbud829
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Choice Votes Percent  
1st 3 21%
2nd 8 57%
They both suck 3 21%
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I don't know which to put in for a contest.

1.
Dark, grave and melancholy.
Abstention from these black arts. Walking this drudgery.
Sovereign's lands.
Desire's dark sullen thrill, teach me wrong, teach me new.
Torture this mind.

2.
Dark, grave and melancholy. Sovereign's land.
Abstention from these black arts. Desire's dark sullen thrill.
Teach me wrong, teach me new. Keep me out.
Walking this drudgery, satisfied with a white man's deed on gaunt nations.
Torture this mind, set me up. Through a numb demise, come child, come lay.
Make me yours.

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2nd option ftw

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I prefer the second.

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∂I spent so long in the darkness
I had almost forgotten how beautiful the moonlight is.∂

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Quote: from Total Destruction at 3:12 pm on Oct. 31, 2009

2nd option ftw
Don't listen to this cuntfaggot, 1

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feeltheshane


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First.

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You'll always be beautiful in my eyes.

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One

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Penultimate just means second to last you pretentious f*ck.

That's not a riot it's a feast, let's eat!
=:B

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Falling Slowly


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Number 1

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I know that times have been rough For the both of us
But I'll pray for a change You see this world has lots to offer

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beguile12

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they both seem to suck.

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angelbud829


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first. It's less scattered

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