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Goodbye, my sweet love.
Replies: 2Last Post Nov. 9 12:55pm by justbreathe13
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It's funny how you say you mean things
when it's all filled with lies.
It's funny how you seem so well kept
when I know you're broken inside.
It's funny how you spend so much time
just sitting, wondering what to do..
when deep inside my heart, I only want to be with you.
It's funny how you act
like being with me is right.
And then it's like it doesnt matter
you're cutting me down to size.
I wish you would figure things out,
decide what you want to do.
Because if you dont, I am sorry to say,
I will be losing you.

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Life is dwindling, my dear sweet friend.
Live free and peaceful.

12:54 pm on Nov. 9, 2009 | Joined: Mar. 2009 | Days Active: 202
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The ending is definitely powerful. Nice job. :)

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...well...

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My world is spinning yet i smile because small fingers tickle my tummy.

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