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Well...I did this.
Replies: 5Last Post Nov. 9 11:21am by amber1991
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Well, I wrote this last night. So, I don't know. Tell me what you think. And if you must say "it sucks", please give me a reason.

~Ultimate Prayer~
God, I know I ask a lot of You
but may I ask one more thing?
Could You send me someone to love,
someone to care about me,
someone to walk through life with?
I know I ask too much,
but this is my biggest prayer
My heart is growing heavier
and my mind's telling lies
Please don't tell me I'm not worthy
I know I'm unworthy of You
Your grace has saved me
and I'm eternally grateful,
but if it's not too much to ask
Could you please send me someone
My heart is crying out
I'm getting tired of being alone
It's becoming unbearable
I can't do it alone
I'm losing my way
I'm getting more lost
I need someone to show me the way


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tock


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Gay

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Squish-squash.

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RIMHfire


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It sucks because I said so.

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darkness253


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i like it. two thumbs up.

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Algorithm


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If you think it sucks, why be a dick about it and bash on the person who wrote it?

Inconsiderate pricks.

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On the old trail
they lay dead.


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Quote: from tock at 11:16 am on Nov. 9, 2009

Gay


Quote: from RIMHfire at 11:16 am on Nov. 9, 2009


It sucks because I said so.

I love how it's mostly you two that talk about my writing. You obviously have nothing better to do with your lives than make insults and not give a reason why.


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