Well, I wrote this last night. So, I don't know. Tell me what you think. And if you must say "it sucks", please give me a reason.
~Ultimate Prayer~ God, I know I ask a lot of You but may I ask one more thing? Could You send me someone to love, someone to care about me, someone to walk through life with? I know I ask too much, but this is my biggest prayer My heart is growing heavier and my mind's telling lies Please don't tell me I'm not worthy I know I'm unworthy of You Your grace has saved me and I'm eternally grateful, but if it's not too much to ask Could you please send me someone My heart is crying out I'm getting tired of being alone It's becoming unbearable I can't do it alone I'm losing my way I'm getting more lost I need someone to show me the way
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RIMHfire
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It sucks because I said so.
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darkness253
Quality Control Engineer
i like it. two thumbs up.
------- I got your back. Hang-loose,SHARE YOUR KNOWLEDGE NOT YOUR CRITICISM.
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Algorithm
Dairy Product Addict
If you think it sucks, why be a dick about it and bash on the person who wrote it?
Inconsiderate pricks.
------- On the old trail they lay dead.
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I love how it's mostly you two that talk about my writing. You obviously have nothing better to do with your lives than make insults and not give a reason why.
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