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a moment in life
Replies: 2Last Post Nov. 6 11:45am by Solomon Grundy
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life is today look and see perhaps tomorrow just a memory do today what your mind dose relate love and devotion a fellin that's there poetry in motion show her you care a rose from the heart, kind words  you say tell her you love her life is today a liftime a liftime of memories, memories of the past when life is gone memories still last when love is tenderd what more to say let lovebe surrenderd life is today show her you love her be by her side dont wait tell tomorrow to love arid duration on earth to smell rose? precious moments conserved whenlove is at the bay there's none in reserve life today just tell her you love her there is moment in life.
tell me what you think of it??

11:44 am on Nov. 6, 2009 | Joined: April 2009 | Days Active: 41
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It wouldn't hurt to use punctuation. you know.

Likewise, perhaps actually spelling words right? Feeling not fellin. Things like that.

Right now, it's terrible.

Post edited at 11:47 am on Nov. 6, 2009 by eklipse

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Punctuate it!!! Damn woman!

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