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fucked, flawed, misunderstood
Replies: 6Last Post Nov. 6 6:04pm by Solomon Grundy
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( evann92 )


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As she stares into the mirror,
Looking back at the devil ,
Wondering ,
What It'll take to fell loved again.
She's aching for the soft chill of his hands ,
Slowly running down her back ,
Yet ,
There's only one thing she's running from.
One of the hardest things in life to do.
Letting go,
If only she could love with meaning , passon and emotion ,
She's love him ,
Only him.
Even if it takes him forever ,
She'll wait ,
Risking everything.
As she tries to run from the past ,
All she see's staring back at her is the devil ,
The devil that's lies beneath her sweet innocent core.
She can't help but wonder what it'll take for him to take her as she is ,
Past, Present & Future ,
Dispite her being ,
Fucked, Flawed & misunderstood .

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--she's such a charmer;--

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DrowningAtSea


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eh...

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Areola


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Too many commas that are used incorrectly.

fell = feel.

The breaks are odd.

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She's gone.
She gave me a pen.
I gave her my heart,
she gave me a pen.


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Craziie


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Sick

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Some of the greater things in life are unseen, that's why
you close your eyes when you kiss, cry, or dream ♥

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daz101


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THAT IS GREAT NO JOKE   BEST POEM I've SEEN TONIGHT        WELL DONE!

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Solomon Grundy


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I don't like it.

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Solomon is a Solo-man
I finally got a fan!
S ϟ G
TOYx is my one and only.

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