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when you are stating something in a essay saying I fear ____. I fear _____ to state what you fear....like is it bad to keep repeating I fear. Because I can not put it into anything else.

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Yes.

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Tired language :/

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Yes, it is.

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In most essays, teachers look for the usage of first person pronouns to dock points everywhere. Try not to say things like I, You, etc. :)

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don't repeat it too much.... depends upon the context though....
try to make it generalized....

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