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Replies: 6Last Post Nov. 3 8:05pm by Heart92
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I know at times I may seem to be rude and unfeeling, but this poem is my proof that I do ineed feel for other creatures.


Farewell my beautiful little girl
I loved you and I kow for damn sure you loved me
The thoughts of your death make my stomache curl
I remember when we first took you to the sea.
I remember when we first got from that enormous white truck,
The pleasant memories would come
Oh, imagine my luck!
I remember when you were wild, untamed and free
When we took you to the camp, and overcame thee.
I remember when we spent our first Christmas together
I thought that you would be with us forever.
I remember when you kissed me for the first time on the cheek,
I was filled with joy, my body turned weak.
I remember when you first ran away,
I thought that I would not survive to see another day.
I remember after your adventure how excited you must have been
And after it you never did it again.
I remember when you got hit by the car,
I remember caring for you and that ugly scar.
I remember your first birthday and your delicious meal
You were treated like a person, and you gave it a feel.
I remember how you snuggled by me when I went to sleep,
I remember how you would wake me when you heard a creep.
I remember when you began to shed your hair,
I had never seen such a thing, and Oh, The scare!
I remember you waking me when something was wrong outside,
I remember when a car was mentioned you wanted to go for a ride.
I remember when caught your very first mouse,
You've been with us for long and in every house.
I remember when I was scared and afraid of the night,
Seeing you brought courage and destroyed my fright.
The years have been long, and hard on your bones,
Soon your body will be small ashes and stones.
I loved you since age four, and you will always remain with me.
So goodbye my beautiful little girl
Sieg Heil, ade, ade, ade!

Cinnamon Bojorquez 08/17/98---10/29/09

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that made me cry...


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dont warn me dood!!

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softbalhottie32


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whos it about.. at first i thought like a little sister. then girlfriend. now a cat? idkkk im confused... but that was beautiful (:

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Heart92


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I love how twisted this poem is.
AMAZING!

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Quote: from Heart92 at 5:39 pm on Nov. 3, 2009

I love how twisted this poem is.
AMAZING!

Tahnk you so very much Stephanie :)

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Quote: from Total Destruction at 10:15 pm on Nov. 3, 2009

Quote: from Heart92 at 5:39 pm on Nov. 3, 2009

I love how twisted this poem is.  
 AMAZING!

Tahnk you so very much Stephanie :)

You're welcome.
Keep up the beautiful work. :)

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