Alexander: It's been such a long time since I've had a meaningful relationship with a woman.

(beat)

Actually, I don't think I've ever had one. I've had cutesy moments here and there with a few... I suppose I'm lucky; some guys don't even manage that much.  There's really no reason for me to be so bent out of shape about love, or the lack of it. ...Is there?

I dunno... I'm just...

(beat)

Even talking about it leaves me confused. I'm staring at the wall for an answer to my own question... like always.

(beat)

I suppose, more than anything, I want to feel important. I want to feel needed. I want to matter to someone in such a deep way that when we embrace... we become the world. Or the world disappears... melts... dissolves... Does any of that make any sense?  

...Listen to me going on and on about what I want! (chuckles) What an Asshole.

Still, it just blows my mind; How do I even know I want any of it? What it'll feel like? How I'll feel about it? And why the fuck do I want it if I don't even know how, what or why for?

I don't know....

(beat)

....Maybe someday i'll meet someone who'll understand. She'll say "stop over thinking it. Just shut up and kiss me."

And i'll love her for it.

Is this something you wrote, and you want to improve it?
Is it something you're thinking of performing, and you want us to tell you if we think it's a good choice?
Etc.

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I dont know what you're looking for feedback on.

Is this something you wrote, and you want to improve it?
Is it something you're thinking of performing, and you want us to tell you if we think it's a good choice?
Etc.

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Something I wrote and want to improve. General impressions would be nice as well.

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It's a bit cliché, don't you think?

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Maybe. Although, love itself is a bit cliche.

Standalone, though, I do agree with Tock about it being kind of cliche.

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It's well written (imo) - I'm able to kind of picture the type person in the context of a play this monologue might fit itself into.

Standalone, though, I do agree with Tock about it being kind of cliche.

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All and all agreed.

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