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Replies: 10Last Post Nov. 3 12:55pm by Reading Your Eyes
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I don't expect a summer romance,
These are much too rounded-off, too unrealistic.
Give me the drawn out, painstaking love
Encompassing all, not just summer,
But spring, fall and winter.

And with you I want the longing and bliss of a schoolboy crush.
But not only this, I want a kiss after a slap on the wrist.

I want to grow up with you.
I want to like you first, love you second.
I want it to be okay for us to talk and fight.
I want to argue so I can make it up to you at night.
I want to travel to the ends of the earth so that I might be nearer to you in my heart.

While I don't know who you are,
Our love will be like foliage in fall,
Changing color, falling to the floor
Coming again, better and more vibrant than before.

Winter, Spring, Summer and Fall.
Winter, Spring, Summer and Fall.


12:41 pm on Nov. 3, 2009
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I like your poems!

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Luvme4eva


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That was beautiful. But why are you anon?

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You forgot the fifth season.

APOCALYPSE !

it was a sweet poem though

If you are a guy i can see why you anon it lol

but its a good poem good work

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MagicalKisses


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thats sweet!

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Im slightly. Hipocritical, sarcastic. Just a bit.

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I'm not too much into your type of prose, but there are some aspects of it that I really liked. Have you thought of a title, or is it winter spring summer and fall?

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Quote: from Ldzpln at 12:44 pm on Nov. 3, 2009

I'm not too much into your type of prose, but there are some aspects of it that I really liked. Have you thought of a title, or is it winter spring summer and fall?

It's called 'Foliage'.


12:45 pm on Nov. 3, 2009
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I LIKEY.


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You're a girl right?

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Quote: from Ldzpln at 12:50 pm on Nov. 3, 2009

You're a girl right?

Nope.  


12:51 pm on Nov. 3, 2009
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I enjoyed that.

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