Earlier that day she had smoked some crack.
She got beat up by a thug whom was black
So graceful in the air
Later that day she is attacked by a bear.

As she's mauled by the bear she remembers her life
It was a shit life
She was dancing naked in the ballerina strip club
She was a total whore, and now the bear is eating her guts

And the ballerina shall.....never ....... dance .....again.

and the bear had a good feed.....

And the sun sets in the shadows of times watch never to her herd again.

It seems to be a bit jumpy, and could flow a lot better. Such as in:

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The child in the 3rd row begins to cry,
The ballerina has a black eye.

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It also seems to not really all go together, and you break out of the stanza scheme after the third stanza :/

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₪This mix could burn a hole in anyone.₪