Critique it! This little light of mine
Shimmers more brilliant than stars.
Blackness of night tries to consume
Your radiance too bright for dark.
Footsteps echo for miles
Into oblivion and beyond.
This light shows the way as a beacon
Of hope and faith in one.
Shivers spiked by cold and fear
Overwhelm and control.
A twinkle in the corner has power
To protect and comfort the soul.
Pain and pity go away at night
When I'm lost in your eyes.
Invincible and invulnerable
Because you're not far from sight.
Rolling over to turn the page
Has never been a simple task
But you're the most loyal friend I know.
I never have to ask.
A light unto my path
And a lamp unto my feet.
Mr. Nightlight, thank you so much
For being selflessly sweet.
cleansing
Bright blue skies encompassing
Cool breezes and rusting leaves.
A dark soul cannot embrace
When second thoughts are reality.
Subconscious thought rules out good
And scrubs over with bad.
The cross is upside down not by gravity,
But by an evil work. He's mad.
Whiteness is purity.
Clean hands; serenity.
God's water washes away a beast.
Open eyes bring comfort
Through vibrant colors and light.
It's over now.
Post edited at 7:29 am on Oct. 28, 2009 by Hi Carie
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Sanitarium, leave me be
Sanitarium, just leave me alone