Tore

A lifeless smile
hidden by eyes that lie
a sadness left by unchanging days
tears fall as i begin to cry

I had it all
friends, and more
but suddenly it has vanished
but through everything my heart has become tore.

It has fought and fought
to keep above the waters of pain
but it has become so much worse
its changed me and ill never be the same

Something changed everything
but then forced it back
an undying love stricken hard
caring and understanding must be something i lack

There used to be a love
told about in the stories of the stars
but i destroyed it more than i thought i could
another loveless night, my heart behind locked bars

but whatever it may be
something churns and churns
it continues endlessly like the deep blue sea
but it hurts like its on fire from 3rd degree burns

But my mind endless
as the starry night sky
and it wonders what'll happen
if i were to fall down and die

Death has never made me afraid
but to live without her is what does
because i had never forgotten about her
but she has because i never gave her my full trust

Never in my life did i think
that id ever fall for her
because i didnt want to ever let her go
because one may hurt you, but with her my pain would have no cure.

I ramble and can seem pointless
but a deepness lives within me
goes further than yet seen before
but without neccessary eyes this deepness you'll never see.

my eyes see no wrong
but burn with endless tears
if i ever lost her for good
to let her go would take countless years.

maybe the day will come
where everything will be understood
because as of this moment
i just wish i could.

i just hope the time will come
that she'll look over my flaws
that one day she will need me
til then i live at a crawl.

I'll love her until the day that i die
try my hardest to be happy and calm
with tears even if i cry
because then maybe everything will stop going wrong.


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I don't like shitty cliché poems with quatrains

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then obviously you don't know shit about poems.

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Quote: from tock at 10:47 am on Oct. 24, 2009

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I don't like shitty cliché poems with quatrains

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then obviously you don't know shit about poems.

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BURN!!

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Quote: from tock at 10:47 am on Oct. 24, 2009

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I don't like shitty cliché poems with quatrains

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then obviously you don't know shit about poems.

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