In this paper, I will address J.L. Mackie's premise in his essay "Evil and Omnipotence" that because good cannot exist without evil God lacks omnipotence and the quality of being wholly-good.
should there be a "," after evil and before God?
as in
In this paper, I will address J.L. Mackie's premise in his essay "Evil and Omnipotence" that because good cannot exist without evil, God lacks omnipotence and the quality of being wholly-good.
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also is it correct to use "that" after "Evil and Omnipotence"? or should I use "on"
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also is it correct to use "that" after "Evil and Omnipotence"? or should I use "on"
The whole "that" was a bit confusing. It's a little bump in the sentence.
But I think your comma is in the right place.
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the entire statement kind of looks a mess to me, but the comma should be there.
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is this better?
In this paper, I will address J.L. Mackie's premise: because good cannot exist without evil God lacks omnipotence and the quality of being wholly-good, in his essay "Evil and Omnipotence."
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If it were me It would go as; In this paper, I will address J.L. Mackie's premise which suggests that because good cannot exist without evil, God lacks omnipotence and the quality of being wholly-good, as written in his essay "Evil and Omnipotence".
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