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it's 8pm, and I still havent started on my essay yet 0_0
Replies: 9 — Last Post Sep. 8, 2008 5:50pm by jdjack92
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I'm supposed to write about my experiences with the 9/11 attacks in NY, since I lived there at the time, and I need to come up with a kick-ass intro for it. I don't know what I'm going to write, I'm a good writer but I'm not inspired right now. And i don't wanna scar myself even more by watching the attacks on youtube over and over again.

Can someone please help me? I need to have a GREAT intro because that's what we're concentrating on in class right now.  

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Don't force shit.  I'll admit 9/11 did not phase me and I live in New York.
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just write about how violated it made you feel.
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start off with a deatiled description/ attention grabber, like it was a normal morning, or so i thought...and continue or start with a quote about 9/11

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Hey mg me I got some great stuff enough to get you an A++++

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"Have you ever wondered what it would feel like to have your whole life torn apart in a matter of a few short minutes?"

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Not that you have to use my idea, of course, but I'm thinking an interesting way to start it could be to say something like:

I've never thought that one moment, one second, one idea could change my life forever.

Not sure where I'd take it after that though.

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On a cold semptember morning, not a rat was running, came...

I tried.  

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So here's my goodbye, no one will cry over me.

I'm not worth any tears.

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start with:::: Painting a Picture
            ::::Asking a Question
           :::: Dialogue (maybe the new on television?)
          :::::Using a Definition(terriosim,meaning of 911,etc.)

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Quote: from A Milli at 5:44 pm on Sep. 8, 2008
Don't force shit.  I'll admit 9/11 did not phase me and I live in New York.

Wow you're just a tough mother fucker arent you? All your answers show you're a tough guy.

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