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I wrote lyrics
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Replies: 5Last Post Sep. 5, 2008 10:35am by ludlight
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Changed worlds
From the first to the third
And back again, confused
I put my thoughts into words
Experience in life; all brought into words
Sought freedom and I found it
Now I'm lost, like a bird
Flying free, over the sea
Soaring over new places
Never knowing where I'm going
Or which direction I'm facing
Those people on the ground
They take it for granted
That support beneath their feet
Of all the things they were granted

I perch on a mountain looking down
Into valleys with men
Searching for the future
And see nothing resembling an end

Does your loyalty lie
In yourself or your family
Or the very men who instigate
The hate-based insanity?

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Yeah; my boys took me to a real studio for the first time today (the owner is a producer name Gee Slang). I wrote it in the morning during class and just spat. We got a beat and everything. That's my verse I set it off. 3 hours  of recording, mxin an blunts. Wanted the whole thing for myself (so I could write more). I'll post it for people to pick apart when its completely mixed down but what do u think of the lyrics? Does it come off as deep? Thats how its supposed to. An a lil' bit obscure/abstract so alot's open to interpretation.

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decent...

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Sung in what style?

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Quote: from Frubeling at 7:19 am on Sep. 4, 2008

Sung in what style?

Rapped. As for who I'm biting flow wise (I have a feeling you don't listen to rap. please prove me wrong); NaS, Pac, Joe Budden...course I'm not near as nice as any of those guys.  


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Quote: from The Artful Dodger at 12:10 am on Sep. 5, 2008

Quote: from Frubeling at 7:19 am on Sep. 4, 2008

Sung in what style?

Rapped. As for who I'm biting flow wise (I have a feeling you don't listen to rap. please prove me wrong); NaS, Pac, Joe Budden...course I'm not near as nice as any of those guys.


I know who they are, but your'e right, I dont listen to rap

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not bad

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