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do u like my song so far?
PLZ STATE WHAT U LIKE OR DONT LIKE
Replies: 9Last Post Oct. 7, 2008 10:11am by Sachacohen2
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Choice Votes Percent  
yes 4 16%
no 10 40%
maybe so 3 12%
i dont know 6 24%
yesno 2 8%
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its about how i feel, and how i put on a face 4 the world 2 c, but its not actually how i am. although, on here, im far more honest than i am in real life. just keep that in mind. ive been writing songs since i was rly little, like as far back as i can remember (which is about 2) like i would make up songs in the bath and on the changing table and b4 i went 2 sleep and stuff
like that. so be harsh, but honest.

Keep my feelings on the inside,
Put on a smile,
But all I really wanna do is cry
At first glance,
No way am I sad,
No, not a chance
But if you look through a magnifying glass,
You'd see,
That's not the real me
Just look and see,
Inside of me,
There's a little bottle where I keep my feelings,
My thoughts from the inside,
Where my two worlds collide,
But its something that you'll never find
Cause its locked up in my mind,
If people really knew me,
They'd think I was crazy,
Yeah they'd think I'm insane,

and ill add more l8r. STEAL MY LYRICS AND ILL FUCKIN RAT U OUT WHEN IM FAMOUS! and tyvm 2 u if u dont! <3

tyvm 2 any1 and every1 who replies!

<3 ma&&!3 <3



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no

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Scandol5Mossie


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umm doesnt sound like a song for one and for two..its the same thing over and over

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I don't like it.

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aww nobody likes it      

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Not at All.

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wow this is just not my day.

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No. Nothing personal - I just don't like this style of music at all.

Deal with bigger issues.

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Quote: from Mish34 at 1:14 pm on Oct. 6, 2008

No. Nothing personal - I just don't like this style of music at all.

Deal with bigger issues.


yea, id sing it 4 u, if i could record it and put it on the computer. it sounds better sung.

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too much like a poem

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