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I think Eternity just spit in your direction.
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Replies: 7Last Post Oct. 7, 2008 10:19am by Lulamae
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For every time forever is said
Eternity spits and swallows.

When forever becomes for heaven
The whispers that reside in screams
Place trust in dreams of halos.

I now see that the ground I step on
Is merely a mat of particles that I will one day fall through.
I realize the sky is just a reflection of light,
I realize that every time I say "my god",
I am refering to an image I've created,
To explain my existence.

You can only exist
If you believe you exist
And if so
You're just breathing...

I lost my breath a long time ago,

And in doing so
I fell down through the gaps between
Protons and electrons,
Because I've always been neutral

And now I'm like the feather
That floats away
On a breeze
That will carry on forever.


And Eternity?
She just swallowed her tongue.


11:50 am on Oct. 6, 2008
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chaosdisown


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Quote: from Anonymous at 11:50 am on Oct. 6, 2008

Eternity spits and swallows.


is Eternity a whore...?

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Genius. Wow.

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Quote: from chaosdisown at 11:51 am on Oct. 6, 2008

Quote: from Anonymous at 11:50 am on Oct. 6, 2008

Eternity spits and swallows.  

 
is Eternity a whore...?


If Eternity is Fortune, then yes she is. even Hamlet says.

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For you these wings bleed my enemies' blood
so I may one day fly...

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chaosdisown


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Quote: from BleedingSteelWings at 11:56 am on Oct. 6, 2008

Quote: from chaosdisown at 11:51 am on Oct. 6, 2008

Quote: from Anonymous at 11:50 am on Oct. 6, 2008

Eternity spits and swallows.  
 

 
 is Eternity a whore...?


If Eternity is Fortune, then yes she is. even Hamlet says.

does Eternity really need to be Fortune to be a whore?

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Eterntiy isn't a whore.

4:41 pm on Oct. 6, 2008
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Eternity...she just swallowed your tongue.

Genius.


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