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A start 4 my new story opinions needed
Replies: 4Last Post Oct. 7, 2008 9:18am by belizabeth
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The Transition


It was about 4 years ago that I moved here to Tennessee. The transition into this new life was not easy.  At first I rebelled and told my parents I hated it here and I wanted to go back to North Carolina where I used to live. Then after about half a year I started to realize, what's the use to rebel when my parents were and are set on staying here in TN. But let's back up a little.

My parents decided to move here on one horrific vacation to Ohio. We went to Ohio to go to Cedar point and while we were there we decided to visit my Aunt and uncle. When we went to see my Aunt and uncle my parents asked about my grandma in TN. That's when they decided that when we headed home we would stop by and see her. Well let me put it this way that vacation was not the best one we've been on.

So okay on the way home we stopped off in TN and went to where my grandma lived.

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that has got to suck im sorry

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okay....

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thats well written. Well structured.

Kinda reminds me of the narrative in fight club.

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Punctured bicycle on a hillside, desolate,
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okay thanks.

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