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is this poem good?
Replies: 10 — Last Post Sep. 27, 2008 4:40am by cadetjones2011
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ok so I wrote this poem for  me and my boyfriend

"Far Away"
We may live far away
But we know that our love will always stay
You have stolen my heart
And it kills me the whole time we are apart
But just knowing how much you love me
You have set my soul free
Everyday I feel your pain
And I know it's the worst kind of stain
But just know that you will always be a part of me
So can't you see
All I ever needed was you
I know you are true
And will never turn my world to blue
I am so glad you are in my life
And one day we shall become husband and wife
And when that special day comes our hearts will finally intertwine
By:Jessica Jones


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I love my soldiers return home safe and soon & God is my hero

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xXxRiotxXx

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Cold fear
I know that your here
Don't lie to me
What the fuck did you think?
That I would forgive you?
Be your best friend?
Just go away
And let this shit end

That's the last poem I wrote.
And yes, I like yours.

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Like walking into a dream
Like nothing you've ever seen

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HangEmHigh


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Awww that's really sweet =)

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Connoisseur 		Reply
Quote: from HangEmHigh at 10:39 am on Sep. 20, 2008
Awww that's really sweet =)
thanks

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Connoisseur 		Reply
Quote: from xXxRiotxXx at 10:39 am on Sep. 20, 2008
Cold fear
I know that your here
Don't lie to me
What the fuck did you think?
That I would forgive you?
Be your best friend?
Just go away
And let this shit end

That's the last poem I wrote.  
And yes, I like yours.

thanks and your poem is good to

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breannafhchick06


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very nice
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yeah its nice actually

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Quote: from sadnessness at 10:56 am on Sep. 20, 2008
yeah its nice actually
thanks

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Any poem is good if it expresses feelings and you can understand or/and identify with them.

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That's why we call it PRESENT.
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Quote: from KathyN at 2:47 pm on Sep. 20, 2008
Any poem is good if it expresses feelings and you can understand or/and identify with them.
thanks

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Quote: from breannafhchick06 at 10:52 am on Sep. 20, 2008
very nice
thanks

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