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That poem i wrote...
Replies: 3 — Last Post Nov. 11, 2008 2:21pm by Behemoth
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it's called, "What's Wrong?" I wrote it because it was too hard for me to tell anyone what was bothering me so I just wrote it on paper. Here's how it should go:

What's wrong?
God used to be my life.
I used to be myself.
Now those things are
Gone, on an invisible
Shelf.

What's wrong?
I love God, but I
Sometimes doubt
His love for me.
 
What's wong?
Everytime I'm
Around or seem
To be surrounded by
Happy people, the
More my happiness
Fades away.

What's wrong?
Sometimes,when I'm
Upset,and don't know
What to do,I say to
God,"Why did you have to go?"

       

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My like is like a depressing song.
A song with a reversed tune.

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u kno i hope i got the message of this but u should b a happy person i used to b exactly lyk that but i learned to b happy and i learned to over come it.
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awe...get over yourself, and cheer up, life's not always good. damn. u don't need anybody feeling sorry for yourself, and btw, burn that fucking poem. =).

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So you were born, and that was a good day
Someday you'll die, and that is a shame
But somewhere in the between was a life of which we all dream
And nothing and no one will ever take that away
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That's really well written
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