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Old Poem
Replies: 6Last Post Oct. 12 8:08pm by Fondziie
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( Sheebobee )


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I wrote this almost a year ago


I remember
I hope you know how much you hurt me
and how much you've made me cry
I've told you time and time again
how I wish you would just die
but I havent been completly honest
and i hope you understand
I still really love you and i want to hold your hand
the way you used to look at me
and how you held me tight
it keeps me up all the time...night after night
I wish you would have told the truth and really showed you cared
I remember laying under the stars
I remember kissing you for the first time
I remember the warmth of your body
I remember your smell
I remember your taste
I remember all the great times we've shared
but i also remember how much pain you caused me
A part of me still really wishes that you cared and held me tight, but i know im better off this way
with out you in my life

its the only 'good' poem Ive ever written
and I havent been able to write a poem since
I think its cause it was such an emotional point in my life...I dont know

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♥ Lifes Like An Hourglass Glued To The Table ♥


8:02 pm on Oct. 12, 2008 | Joined Mar. 2008 | 188 Days Active
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katiescarlett


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Why was this explicit?

And I like it...

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yo eternamente te voy a amar.
4/21 y eternamente.


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Joey watch me


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it's a awesome poem

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IsInsanitySoBad


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that is very good.

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I want to peel off your skin and eat it.

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drcutie0507


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omg this is a nice fucking poem i love it nice work

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bombing for peace is like effin for virginity...☮

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XxRubberDuckiexX

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That's REALLY good. I've written a few poems, too.

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Be|Crazy|Get|Loud|
Because|You're|Not|Young|Forever|

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Fondziie


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thats awsome i love it =)

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FoN"DziiE D.I.L.L.I.G.A.F HAGGARD

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