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Is this a good beggining
Replies: 13 — Last Post Oct. 10, 2008 7:55am by belizabeth
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Southern Girl   By: Brandy E. Rogers
Short stories of actual things that have happened.

Born in 1994 on The Fort Gordon army base in Georgia on February 8th.  I am a proud southern girl but we all have our faults and our stories. Well at least I know I do.

Okay my first story of my life begins when I was in the second grade. Me and my friend Dezma were daring each other to do some stupid things. Well before I go on let me back up a little.

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no

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If you're in, like, seventh grade, sure
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Not really. It isn't very well written, not very creative either.

Post edited at 7:45 am on Oct. 10, 2008 by Chiefette

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why does your first life story begin in the second grade?

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hmmm... i don't know.

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You're already skipping around.
It's grammatically incorrect.
It's poorly written.

It MIGHT get you a D

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No.  Simple answer, no.

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okay thanks. i'll start over.

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thats horrible. start over.

say this

I was sucking some guys dick and my daddy walked in on me. He wanted his sucked too.

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fail, or not, i dont actually know

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heck no...

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no

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okay....

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