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Replies: 11Last Post Sep. 25, 2008 10:28pm by MR UNKNOWN
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any tips/critiques?

graphite, ebony..paper


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try to remove the lines to make it not look cartoonish.

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thats a great deal of shading. maybe I should use graphite someday.. looks pretty great to me. Loving it. lets see you do headshots now with graphite. Im sure you can do it :D (hands are just to easy :D gogogo! )

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Draw a middle finger going up a bumhole next time,
but good job.

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Quote: from siddox3 at 12:48 am on Sep. 26, 2008

try to remove the lines to make it not look cartoonish.
ahh arg I know

but I don't know how lol..



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Quote: from rufoo at 12:49 am on Sep. 26, 2008

thats a great deal of shading. maybe I should use graphite someday.. looks pretty great to me. Loving it. lets see you do headshots now with graphite. Im sure you can do it :D (hands are just to easy :D gogogo! )
actully it was the ebony that was used for the intense shading aha

heads ahhhhhh
I've only drawn one head and it was horrible..
I'm reading a book and the next chapter is on portraits...so I'll wait till then aha

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Quote: from mr unknown at 9:51 pm on Sep. 25, 2008

Quote: from siddox3 at 12:48 am on Sep. 26, 2008

try to remove the lines to make it not look cartoonish.
ahh arg I know

but I don't know how lol..


draw the lines lighter, then rub it with paper like how you did with the shadings.

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I think you may have a slight tendency to make the thumb too big. I've noticed that I do it, too, usually.

The shading looks nice, but you could add more structure (it'll help to understand the hand itself). Perhaps feel for the hard and soft spots of your hand, and start from there.

Ah... I totally miss thinking in terms of art. Are you big on drawing?


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Quote: from irrationalthought at 1:03 am on Sep. 26, 2008

I think you may have a slight tendency to make the thumb too big. I've noticed that I do it, too, usually.

The shading looks nice, but you could add more structure (it'll help to understand the hand itself). Perhaps feel for the hard and soft spots of your hand, and start from there.

Ah... I totally miss thinking in terms of art. Are you big on drawing?



I just started aha but uh I haven't stopped since I started

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Quote: from mr unknown at 10:05 pm on Sep. 25, 2008

Quote: from irrationalthought at 1:03 am on Sep. 26, 2008

I think you may have a slight tendency to make the thumb too big. I've noticed that I do it, too, usually.  

 The shading looks nice, but you could add more structure (it'll help to understand the hand itself). Perhaps feel for the hard and soft spots of your hand, and start from there.  

 Ah... I totally miss thinking in terms of art. Are you big on drawing?



I just started aha but uh I haven't stopped since I started


Cool.
If you just started, may I make a suggestion? I need to leave, but if you've never done blind contour, that's a really great way to understand detail, especially with hands—or really, just the human body in general. It also helps if you have an awkward position, or your angle is super foreshortened.

Plus, it's really fun and silly to do.
Night.


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Quote: from irrationalthought at 1:10 am on Sep. 26, 2008

Quote: from mr unknown at 10:05 pm on Sep. 25, 2008

Quote: from irrationalthought at 1:03 am on Sep. 26, 2008

I think you may have a slight tendency to make the thumb too big. I've noticed that I do it, too, usually.

  The shading looks nice, but you could add more structure (it'll help to understand the hand itself). Perhaps feel for the hard and soft spots of your hand, and start from there.

  Ah... I totally miss thinking in terms of art. Are you big on drawing?


 
 I just started aha but uh I haven't stopped since I started


Cool.
If you just started, may I make a suggestion? I need to leave, but if you've never done blind contour, that's a really great way to understand detail, especially with hands—or really, just the human body in general. It also helps if you have an awkward position, or your angle is super foreshortened.

Plus, it's really fun and silly to do.  
Night.


yup, I've done a few actully

I'm reading "drawing on the right side of the brain" actually, and I imagine you found that exercise from there

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Quote: from siddox3 at 1:00 am on Sep. 26, 2008

Quote: from mr unknown at 9:51 pm on Sep. 25, 2008

Quote: from siddox3 at 12:48 am on Sep. 26, 2008

try to remove the lines to make it not look cartoonish.
ahh arg I know  

 but I don't know how lol..  

 


draw the lines lighter, then rub it with paper like how you did with the shadings.

wow that actually works very well ahah

thankyou

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