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Replies: 3 — Last Post Oct. 1, 2008 8:15am by punkypanda
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As his vioce deepends,
The pain only gets worse.
More powerful than ever.
He slaps her to the ground.
Only caring about himself.
Scenceless.
As she screams,
'Mercy please don't do this!'
He rapes her repeatedly.
She's left on the ground.
Empty of herself.
Alone.
He's taken everything but her heart.
The only thing that will carry her through the cold nights wind.

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sucks.

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Quote: from dont notice me at 8:13 am on Oct. 1, 2008
sucks.
this.

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good but its 'senseless'

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