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What do you think?
Replies: 6 — Last Post Nov. 5, 2008 2:21am by ElephantStone
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Please point out some things I can work on. I've already pinned these things down myself from self-critique:

I should really take my time and do the shadows more carefully.

And yes, there is a signature on there on the bottom right but I didn't want people to see my last name.

-Note: it isn't a portrait of anyone. Well, my intentions were no one, really, but it ended up sort of looking like me.



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I love the eyes. You have a very talented skill.

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Hmm....
I think it should be a bit longer and narrower.
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Quote: from Riot at 5:40 pm on Oct. 27, 2008
Hmm....
I think it should be a bit longer and narrower.

What should be longer and narrower? I mean, I'm not saying that your opinion is wrong, but if you mean the face, you can't really judge that unless I had a picture source.

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MR UNKNOWN


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your proportions are off

red = you (based on noes)
green = correct (based on eyes)


correct me if I'm wrong because I'm still new at this

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I love it
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well are we aiming to do a realistic drawing or a cartoon? Because it succeeds in the latter.

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