Please point out some things I can work on. I've already pinned these things down myself from self-critique:
I should really take my time and do the shadows more carefully.
And yes, there is a signature on there on the bottom right but I didn't want people to see my last name.
-Note: it isn't a portrait of anyone. Well, my intentions were no one, really, but it ended up sort of looking like me.
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I love the eyes. You have a very talented skill.
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Hmm.... I think it should be a bit longer and narrower.
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Hmm.... I think it should be a bit longer and narrower.
What should be longer and narrower? I mean, I'm not saying that your opinion is wrong, but if you mean the face, you can't really judge that unless I had a picture source.
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your proportions are off red = you (based on noes) green = correct (based on eyes)
correct me if I'm wrong because I'm still new at this
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I love it
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well are we aiming to do a realistic drawing or a cartoon? Because it succeeds in the latter.
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