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another colored pencil drawing
Replies: 9 — Last Post Nov. 1, 2008 10:28pm by MR UNKNOWN
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oi oi oi
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bahh it doesn't look perfect but I guess I'm happy?

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prismicolor pencils




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its a bit wonky, but otherwise ok xx

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The apple one you posted last night was better but its still good.

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cool

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lacks depth

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Concentrate on your lines a bit more.  If youre doing still life, draw what you see.  For example, the bottom of the glass, is not rounded properly.  And the sides of the mouth of the glass in real life are straight but on the right side in your drawing it is slightly curved.  Attention to small details is the key.

But otherwise good.  I <3 Prismacolour.

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Quote: from morwen at 12:45 pm on Nov. 1, 2008
Concentrate on your lines a bit more. If youre doing still life, draw what you see. For example, the bottom of the glass, is not rounded properly. And the sides of the mouth of the glass in real life are straight but on the right side in your drawing it is slightly curved. Attention to small details is the key.

But otherwise good. I <3 Prismacolour.

bahh yes, I know

I'm still getting used to colored pencil (this is only my second thing I've ever done


graphite is easy and you can erase,

I don't think it's possible to redo the bottom part of the glass.

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work on perspective!

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Definitely work on perspective. Everything looks a bit wonky - especially the bottom of the glass. If that were a real glass it would not be standing up! However it is shaded rather nicely.

The corner of the table looks a bit strange, as morwen said you need to draw exactly what you see and I think on closer inspection you'll find that the table does not have that sharp of a corner.

Perhaps practise by using bulkier cylinder shaped items just to get a better idea of perspective, even doing lots of rough sketches should help you to improve your skills.

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Quote: from MissKate at 1:25 am on Nov. 2, 2008
Definitely work on perspective. Everything looks a bit wonky - especially the bottom of the glass. If that were a real glass it would not be standing up! However it is shaded rather nicely.  

The corner of the table looks a bit strange, as morwen said you need to draw exactly what you see and I think on closer inspection you'll find that the table does not have that sharp of a corner.

Perhaps practise by using bulkier cylinder shaped items just to get a better idea of perspective, even doing lots of rough sketches should help you to improve your skills.

yeah, I think I'm just jumping too fast into this, I've never worked with glass or a transparent bottle before so yeah,

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