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Replies: 1Last Post Oct. 26, 2008 10:42pm by Jay JWLH
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This was wrote during a very hard part of my life, my grandma had died my boyfriend of two years broke up with me, and my mom had kicked me out cause we weren't getting along. But all is good now, I would just like some Comments(if your gonna say its dumb don't reply please, I would like encouraging feed back)


Anger fills the room; they are all dead to me,

Feelings flooding through, I wish they'd all shut-up so I can think,

Hatred fills my heart, once I am gone they will never see me again,

I hate this life.. the way it runs, people always breathing down your neck,

I'm running away, don't come looking for me, you might not like what you see;

Away from the pain, betrayal and lies, away from the dark paraylzying eyes,

Don't act on anger is what I was told, but its all I have left and I'm using my resource,

She told me to leave and now I'm gone;

I hope it hurts her until I decide to come home,

My heart was broke, and my throat slit, I'm slowly bleeding into the night,

Nobody knows, nor do they care, only when it suits them are they ever there;

I'll die alone with nobody around, and someone will find me after I am already in hell,

They will all regret the choice they made, when they come to my funeral on that wonderful day,

I'll watch from the sidelines and laugh in their face,

and scream from the sides as I watch their memories become forever etched on their face.

Post edited at 10:12 pm on Oct. 26, 2008 by baby brandi 1408

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That's sort of scary. Glad to hear you got through all of that.

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