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this is the begining og a story..which i wrote in the summer when i was bored....
its kinda cheesy...tell me what u think of it and if i sd write more.

I paused for a moment panting heavily, adjusted my skirt and sprawled down onto the expanse of grass below. My mind wondered as I stretched out my arms, though quickly dismissing current thoughts I turned my attention to my surroundings. The sky was a dark shade of blue, virtually cloudless and the air was filled with a grassy smell.
I often liked coming to the park, I could spend ages without realising. There was hardly anyone around bar some dog walkers and a few skaters milling around the skate park. I myself had had a skate boarding phase once, but like a lot of things it had frazzled out rather quickly, especially as my mum kept tutting in disapproval.
"Skate boarding, you could seriously injure yourself. Besides skate boarding is for tom boys and you're certainly not one of those."
Although I soon found that I was not very good at it and it gave up. I loved my mum (in my own way), but she could sometimes be quite irritating.  
One thing that I didn't love was my mums dress sense or lack of one. You see denim jeans with a loose fitting denim jacket aren't really my sort of thing.
I arose, wiped down my clothes and looked at my watch.
It was 7.00pm
So I decided I would walk round the park and then head home. My parents were coming home late anyway as they had been invited to a dinner party.
As I neared the skate park I could hear someone playing a guitar and from time to time the faint hum of singing. So I stood there taking in its raw sound. I could have listened for ages. Expect this moment didn't last long, as it was soon shattered by the hum and whir of my phone. This in turn caused the boy to turn around and I could see that he was with a friend. He had thick tousled dark brown hair, whilst his friend on the other hand had a curly blondish mop. The boy gave me a warm smile. Shyly I smiled back. Quickly I checked my text message, which turned out to be from my dad.

Back in about 20 mins.
Love dad xx

Discontented I sighed at the thought of having to go home so soon. As I recommenced walking I noticed that the boy was wearing straight leg black trousers and a white t shirt with a loose shirt over the top.
"Nice..." I thought to myself. "I'll have to come back tomorrow evening."
As I approached what was known as biker's hill I saw a group of hooded youths that must have been only a year or so older then myself. They were coming up from the right side, so feeling wary I changed path quickening my pace as I went.
"Its ok, its ok" I kept telling myself, but it wasn't ok. Suddenly I was enclosed in the tight grip of one of the youths, his body thrust against mine. I could smell the stench of cheap beer poignant on his breath; this consequently made me cough a little. I tried to fight him off, though this proved unsuccessful.
"HELP, HE..!" I tried to shout.
This was cut short when another youth shoved his hand over my mouth.
"Whoa babe, you're a feisty one aren't you" sneered the first youth.
As this was taking place I could feel one of them rooting through my bag.
"LEAVE HER ALONE OR I'LL CALL THE FUCKING POLICE!" came a voice from afar. The boy I knew it was him.
"Oh has your boyfriend come to save you..? Fucking emo." Sniggered someone from behind.
Suddenly the group of youths let go racing towards "guitar boys" direction. I knew that I should stay and help him, but my body told my other wise, I ran towards the park gate leaving my mobile on the floor were it had fallen and ran home.
Unlocking the door I could hear the TV on in the background. "Amy?" asked my mum from the next room.  
"Yep it's me" I replied.
"Were have you been?" enquired my dad as I entered the kitchen.
"Only the park"
"ONLY THE PARK...? You know you're not supposed to go to the park at this time of the evening on your own."
"Yeh...but its still light outside dad, besides..."
"Besides what?"
"I'm 17" I muttered under my breath.



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I wanted to tell my parents about what had happened, but how could I? They'd say I told you so. Shaken up by my evenings experience I made myself a mug of tea and went to run a bath. I'd think about telling them later.
The soapy water covered my bare skin; it gave me a satisfying felling. Taking three deep breaths I closed my eyes and let my mind wonder, yet I couldn't stop thinking about those guys from the park. His body against mine, "babe" I was no ones "babe", it was sickening.
"What about Guitar boy what had happened to him?" I wondered. I wanted to make sure that he was alright, though I knew nothing about him, bar what he looked like. I could try going back to the park, but I wasn't sure that he would be there again, besides my parents wouldn't let me.
So after my bath I decided to take a shot at telling my parent what had happened.
" I have something to say." Declared I as I walked into the living room.
"Yes Ams?" replied my dad
My parents now turned to face me.
"This evening at the park..." I cleared my throat
" Erm...I kind of got mugged"
And I recounted the story of what had happened, making sure I didn't leave out any details.
"Oh Ams" sighed my mum, as she put her arms around me
"You should have told me earlier. What did I tell you, not to go to the park at that time of the evening.."
A lecture really wasn't what I needed. I kept going over the fact that if it wasn't for the boy things could have been worse.
"Who is this guitar boy?" inquired my dad with concern.
My parents just didn't understand.
The last 2 weeks of school passed by quickly. My parents wouldn't let my out in the evening on my own, although one evening I did go to the park with my friends, but there was sign of the boy. So I decided to put him to the back of my mind and move on.


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