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I think it would be great to receive some feedback on my story.
Replies: 0 — Last Post Oct. 23, 2008 11:19pm by B E K
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It's called 'A Visible Spectrum'. I have the first two chapters on my deviantART.

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It's the only two things I have up so far, if you don't understand, then it's 'Elliott 1:1" and "Elliott 1:2"


PLEASE leave some feedback.

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