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exceedinglyrare
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He can borrow my interpretation if he wants...as long as he recognizes that it's mine :P
------- Let yourself be enchanted, You just might break through To ever ever after
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Event Horizon
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Quote: from the real anti christ at 5:31 pm on Sep. 9, 2008
Quote: from Event Horizon at 2:40 pm on Sep. 9, 2008
Ah, that's what my interpretation was missing. I had the same thoughts up until that last idea, the most important. I agree 100% with your interpretation, the fly distracting her from the light, that power of the King that is to be witnessed. Thanks, I was taking a step back to see what I needed in my interpretation, and that was it. 
Get your own interpretation noob. Were you seriously just sitting about waiting for someone to post something you thought looked smart so you could agree with it. Your first reply was shitty so I don't blame you for trying to steal hers.. You only served to point out the obvious: 1. The fly was the central theme. 2. The poem was about death. I have no idea why I am being so mean... oh wait yeah its becasue your a little bitch who just claimed to completely agree with someone whos interpretation was completely different from your first attempt. Suck it. 
did you not read my post PRIOR to hers? I had all of the same elements except the fact that as I saw the fly as merely her main concern, as though neither she, nor her friends/family mattered at that moment, she found that the fly was really that little touch of nature. That power that death has to do what it wants with us. The fly showed us that what magic we are looking for in death is all just that which we perceive as magical. The only power that this 'king' has, is what you give him in those moments before death. If a mere fly can blind you of this "power", is it all that powerful?
------- Life is pleasant. Death is peaceful.It's the transition that's troublesome. --Isaac Asimov
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Event Horizon
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And since you are going to bitch about MY post, let's examine YOUR literary genius Quote: from the real anti christ at 4:01 am on Sep. 9, 2008
Is the king not God? 
duh
Is the Fly not the Devil? 
no
Is this whole thing not a parody of the marriage of heaven and hell in so few words?
no lets look at your other post
Since the fly appers so much I can only assume its a central figure. I think it represents the futility of living. Then again that could just be my mood so suck it. Thats the only real opinion I had after reading. Everything else was advanced English four AP test prep bullshit. 
So you got that the fly was the central theme as well, bravo. The futility of living? where did you get that? because she said its buzz was blue and uncertain? grow the fuck up, and if you are going to criticize someone, back your own shit up edit: Besides, I didn't try to steal anything, she posted her response, I agreed, I noted my agreement, and then I thanked her for her insight so that I wasn't sitting here thinking about what sounded so un-right about my first thought. Post edited at 3:05 pm on Sep. 9, 2008 by Event Horizon
------- Life is pleasant. Death is peaceful.It's the transition that's troublesome. --Isaac Asimov
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the real anti christ
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Quote: from Event Horizon at 5:01 pm on Sep. 9, 2008
And since you are going to bitch about MY post, let's examine YOUR literary genius Quote: from the real anti christ at 4:01 am on Sep. 9, 2008
Is the king not God? 
duh
Is the Fly not the Devil? 
no
Is this whole thing not a parody of the marriage of heaven and hell in so few words?
no lets look at your other post
Since the fly appers so much I can only assume its a central figure. I think it represents the futility of living. Then again that could just be my mood so suck it. Thats the only real opinion I had after reading. Everything else was advanced English four AP test prep bullshit. 
So you got that the fly was the central theme as well, bravo. The futility of living? where did you get that? because she said its buzz was blue and uncertain? grow the fuck up, and if you are going to criticize someone, back your own shit up edit: Besides, I didn't try to steal anything, she posted her response, I agreed, I noted my agreement, and then I thanked her for her insight so that I wasn't sitting here thinking about what sounded so un-right about my first thought. 
My shit is fine. I was mocking the poem in the first three quotes and comparing it to The marriage of Heaven in hell firstly. Also I wasn't pointing out that the fly was central so much as what that meant. I don't have to back my shit up becasue I'm not a cop out like you. "oh shit I wish I thought of that! I now find it necessary to point out that I too agree with what the chick said becasue I'm a douche who thinks it will make me look better." On that not I then disagree with you BOTH. It is exactly about futility. She was prepared, she had mourners, she was just waiting for the judgment. She got nothing. The fly is the thing which reminds her of this more and more the closer she gets to death and the she sees that there is nothing. You are right in that its interfering with her idea of death as glorious and uplifting. However the reason for that is that the fly represents everything she had wished aginst. Instead bright lights and happiness she got a fly and nothing.
------- Out of smoke then he appears Master of disguise.
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( medjai )
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We're not ready for another poem yet because while your thoughts are certainly on target, do you really believe the theme to be the uncontrollable nature of death? Certainly this is an expected passing, planned and arranged, most of these people have gradually mourned her passing and grew to accept it well before this day, but today is the day, it's her passing, her final witness to the proverbial greatness of God, and it's going well, and then a fly enters the scene, buzzing around giving more of a shit about how he get can through that glass pane than anything else. What message then does she bring us other than the backdrop literality of plans gone awry? I found this poem interesting because it managed to take a very serious situation like death and then to transfer our attention to a fly. After death, and even while you're dying, life goes on. It's not a big deal. I'm not going to post another poem in this thread, maybe another day.
------- O` tru apothecary! Thy drugs are quick. Thus with a kiss I die.
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exceedinglyrare
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I'm hungry, give me some time to get back to this, but I will get back to it.
------- Let yourself be enchanted, You just might break through To ever ever after
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