I need opinions.What's good and what needs to be worked on? Thanks Not a cloud in the sky, I look to the light.
Time soon passes, darkness covers the night.
People grouped together, like wolves in a pack.
There are people out here that will never come back.
The fireworks flash and kids kissing all dash.
Love takes everyone I know, so I am left all alone.
But the thing I'm most scared of, lies right in front of me.
That I'm afraid I'll never know real love.
I hate this life I'm living.
I want the luck other people are given.
Thinking about giving up, thinking to just stop trying.
But every time I see your face, I just keep on lying.
Now what the hell is going on?
What is this I have found?
Every little thing I do, goes straight into the ground.
I'll fight to the death for what I love and I'll fight to the end for you my friend.
Nothing else can bother me. I'm at the lowest of the low.