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I wrote this sex scene introduction and I need some opinions. I tried to make it as realistic as possible. ------------------------------------------ "Thanks for minding the kids, Zerana," said Benatrisha, "I realise it's a schoolnight and everything. Skyler is on his cellphone outside. He'll pay you and drive you home. I'm heading to bed". "Goodnight, Mrs Lavertola!" Skyler came inside. "Thanks a bunch, Zerana. Here's a fifty" "Oh, that won't do at all" she smirked, pulling a baseball bat out from behind her back. "What the f-?" exclaimed Skyler before Zerana knocked him out with the bat. Zerana's boyfriends came out from behind the curtain. "Let's do this thing!" one of them said, pulling KY out of his pocket. Zerana, Malfasa, Triston and Derkola began stripping Skyler. ---------------------------------------------- So that's the lead-up to the sex. What do you think so far? Post edited at 7:34 am on Sep. 14, 2008 by Anonymous
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mikeyp123
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This sounds a little bit rapey.
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tick makes me tock.
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AlexxRawrr
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what the hell is with the weird names!
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ReesesLuverx3
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um.... freaaakky freakkky.. sounds like some creepy soap opera
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hotsaucii princess
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umm its alrght ina werd kinda raping way
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I feel like im on top of a moutain if anyone
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Mattie17
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those names must be fake
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ummm... OO have you heard of quizzila or sumin idk how to spell it lots of good stories there check it out
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Quote: from Anonymous at 3:33 pm on Sep. 14, 2008
 Oh sorry. The husband's name was orginally Tom but I changed it to Skyler. I guess I didn't edit all the 'Tom's
Well change it back to Tom. Skyler is a stupid name. As is Zerana, Malfasa, Triston, Derkola and, of course, Benatrisha. Also, how does a teenage girl knock down a grown man without a fight?
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Seriously... O____O
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