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its rape

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Quote: from SpM at 7:38 am on Sep. 14, 2008

Quote: from Anonymous at 3:37 pm on Sep. 14, 2008

She's actually 647 years old and is stronger than any grown man.

Firstly, why is the fact that it's a schoolnight relevant?

Secondly, please tell me she isn't a vampire.


Yes she is.


7:39 am on Sep. 14, 2008
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And she looks like a beautiful 14 year old so Benatrisha would assume she attends school.

7:40 am on Sep. 14, 2008
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Quote: from Anonymous at 3:39 pm on Sep. 14, 2008

Yes she is.

Did you just decide to write the most unoriginal story you could possibly think of?

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Quote: from Anonymous at 3:40 pm on Sep. 14, 2008

And she looks like a beautiful 14 year old so Benatrisha would assume she attends school.

By the way, why exactly are these people gang raping Tom?

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What the hell?

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Is this supposed to be some sort of parody of the ill-received sex scene I wrote earlier?

edit: I would not be surprised if Permious wrote this.

Post edited at 7:45 am on Sep. 14, 2008 by junkielik77


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Quote: from SpM at 7:41 am on Sep. 14, 2008

Quote: from Anonymous at 3:40 pm on Sep. 14, 2008

And she looks like a beautiful 14 year old so Benatrisha would assume she attends school.

By the way, why exactly are these people gang raping Tom?

They're going to "rape" Skyler so that Derkola can consume his libido.

He's a Drikarst Warrior and he needs to consume a libido every 17 days in order to stay alive.


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Quote: from Anonymous at 3:46 pm on Sep. 14, 2008

They're going to "rape" Skyler so that Derkola can consume his libido.  

He's a Drikarst Warrior and he needs to consume a libido every 17 days in order to stay alive.



Why?

And why are they "raping" him in his own house with his wife in an adjacent room?


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And why would a superstrong vampire need a baseball bat?

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Quote: from SpM at 7:49 am on Sep. 14, 2008

Quote: from Anonymous at 3:46 pm on Sep. 14, 2008

They're going to "rape" Skyler so that Derkola can consume his libido.  

 He's a Drikarst Warrior and he needs to consume a libido every 17 days in order to stay alive.



Why?

And why are they "raping" him in his own house with his wife in an adjacent room?


I believe this is a parody, of the sex scene I wrote earlier, in which you called "awkward".

This is even more unrealistic than mine was.


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Quote: from SpM at 7:49 am on Sep. 14, 2008

Quote: from Anonymous at 3:46 pm on Sep. 14, 2008

They're going to "rape" Skyler so that Derkola can consume his libido.

 He's a Drikarst Warrior and he needs to consume a libido every 17 days in order to stay alive.



Why?

And why are they "raping" him in his own house with his wife in an adjacent room?


The question of 'why?' is a recurring theme in this series of novels I'm writing, and all my characters find themselves asking it, and considering suicide. Zerana and Triston both cut.

His wife is asleep.


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Quote: from Anonymous at 3:50 pm on Sep. 14, 2008

The question of 'why?' is a recurring theme in this series of novels I'm writing, and all my characters find themselves asking it, and considering suicide. Zerana and Triston both cut.

I'm asking about the nature of a  Drikarst Warrior, not existential angst or ridiculous emo vampires.


His wife is asleep.

She left the room 5 seconds before they clubbed him. She'd undress, brush her teeth and wonder why her husband wasn't joining her.

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Quote: from junkielik77 at 3:50 pm on Sep. 14, 2008

I believe this is a parody, of the sex scene I wrote earlier, in which you called "awkward".  

This is even more unrealistic than mine was.



Yeah, I realise it's probably a troll. There aren't any other entertaining topics up though, so I may as well play along.

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lol. Wow.

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