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So, is this hot or not?
Replies: 16Last Post Sep. 14, 2008 7:40am by TheAntiBarbie
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Hey, I'm the one who was posting a few days ago, about being given an opportunity by Harlequin to write an erotica for them. I am 16 years old.

I was really uncertain about whether I was going to do it or  not, but I have decide to start writing it at least.

So, let me run this idea by you. You don't have to read romance, but just work with me here.

It's a Fantasy Romance, and one of the characters has the power to read/control minds.

So, in one of the sex scenes, he literally gives the girl an orgasm, just with his mind. But of course, they do other things too.

So, hot or not? (And of course, it will depend on how well I write it)

But assuming I write it well.


6:07 am on Sep. 14, 2008
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hot  

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XX8BALLXX


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funny and mayb slighty hot but it aint nt hot

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GoodFairy13


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I'd read it.
It very much depends on the quality of your writing.
Sounds good.


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venomromance


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Not hot.

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It is a possibility to be hot. Like you said, it depends on how well it is written.

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alastrxxna


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Possibly hot.

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Depending on writing ability, hook me up!

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Writing ability...i could see that working out good tho

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liveone555


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Show it 2 me after pm maybe??

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Sorry but that is just not hot. It is too sci-fi ish.

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18SoulReaper18


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sounds cool to me. pm me about more details

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depends on writing ability.
pm me.

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scott sm


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copying off the movie what women want starring mel gibson so not hot

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depends on HOW you write it. make it good! lol xx

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