Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Do you like this Poem Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post Tex Lukas Posted at 2:18 pm on Dec. 11, 2008 I just wrote this poem last night and was debating wheather or not to put it on. but, i am now :) The missing treasure of this sinking vessel On the seafloor, where it would nestle Against the base for years it'd lay Patiently waiting for that special day When I would come to claim my prize Hoping the chest to my surprise Would hold the heart that I've been missing The talks, the laughs, the hugs, the kissing That day has come and now I'll find What lies ahead, no longer behind I've searched through darkness, to the deepest sea And found that chest staring back at me What lies inside, I do not know Unlock the latch and open slow I peek within, with nerves I'm shaking The prize inside could stop the aching Cause within the chest that I've searched for I found the heart and even more The talks, the laughs, they all were there The hugs, the kisses, for me to share The most beautiful treasure I've finally seized Did not imagine I could be so pleased I searched so long through the deep sea blue I love you baby, my prize is you

Replies Tex Lukas Posted at 2:25 pm on Dec. 11, 2008 Quote: from furr at 2:23 pm on Dec. 11, 2008 i love it god job <3 r u from texas???? Thank you and yes. why? Tex Lukas Posted at 2:25 pm on Dec. 11, 2008 Quote: from FuzzyBearJr at 2:21 pm on Dec. 11, 2008 oo i likey   Thanks   furr Posted at 2:23 pm on Dec. 11, 2008 i love it god job <3 r u from texas???? Tex Lukas Posted at 2:21 pm on Dec. 11, 2008 Quote: from RIMHfire at 2:19 pm on Dec. 11, 2008 No. Well how should i change it then? don't just say no :P FuzzyBearJr Posted at 2:21 pm on Dec. 11, 2008 oo i likey RIMHfire Posted at 2:19 pm on Dec. 11, 2008 No. All 6 previous replies displayed.