Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic it's 8pm, and I still havent started on my essay yet 0_0 Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post CherryxBomb Posted at 5:43 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 I'm supposed to write about my experiences with the 9/11 attacks in NY, since I lived there at the time, and I need to come up with a kick-ass intro for it. I don't know what I'm going to write, I'm a good writer but I'm not inspired right now. And i don't wanna scar myself even more by watching the attacks on youtube over and over again. Can someone please help me? I need to have a GREAT intro because that's what we're concentrating on in class right now.

Replies jdjack92 Posted at 5:50 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Quote: from A Milli at 5:44 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Don't force shit.  I'll admit 9/11 did not phase me and I live in New York. Wow you're just a tough mother fucker arent you? All your answers show you're a tough guy. basketball5 Posted at 5:46 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 start with:::: Painting a Picture             ::::Asking a Question            :::: Dialogue (maybe the new on television?)           :::::Using a Definition(terriosim,meaning of 911,etc.) hI jAMES Posted at 5:45 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 On a cold semptember morning, not a rat was running, came... I tried.   JennyColada Posted at 5:45 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Not that you have to use my idea, of course, but I'm thinking an interesting way to start it could be to say something like: I've never thought that one moment, one second, one idea could change my life forever. Not sure where I'd take it after that though. MystiqueBeauty16 Posted at 5:45 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 "Have you ever wondered what it would feel like to have your whole life torn apart in a matter of a few short minutes?" bassguitarplayer2010 Posted at 5:45 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Hey mg me I got some great stuff enough to get you an A++++ LittleItaly Posted at 5:45 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 start off with a deatiled description/ attention grabber, like it was a normal morning, or so i thought...and continue or start with a quote about 9/11 Bitner Posted at 5:45 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 just write about how violated it made you feel. A Milli Posted at 5:44 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Don't force shit.  I'll admit 9/11 did not phase me and I live in New York. All 9 previous replies displayed.